I’ve been reading a LOT lately. A lot more than I used to. I’ve started reviewing for a few publishing houses (including Kensington) and having the authors on my blog for interviews and excerpts and giveaways. It’s been so darn fun meeting all these new-to-me authors!
I also write a craft column for Savvy Authors once a month. This, I think, is the greatest challenge, because while many books are good, its tough to find the ones with craft so stellar I can use it as a teaching point. I’m also joining Roni Loren’s blog this month as the suspense/thriller reviewer for a once-a-month post and suggested read.
One book I read recently (actually listened to on audio during my long drive to work) was DAMAGED by Pamela Callow. I started listening to it and turned it off. The beginning scene just didn’t grab me. Later, I started listening again, and as soon as that first scene was over, the book absolutely took off. I think this is the first book since Stephen King’s PET CEMETARY that turned out to be just too intense for me to finish. It was THAT good. The plot was so dynamic and heart wrenching. Characters intertwined into a weave so complex I couldn’t stop listening. What ended up making me put it away? The romance.
Okay, it was a thriller, so I can’t fault the book for the romance aspect. And I didn’t put it down because it was bad. I put it down because it was heartbreaking. The protagonist heroine and antagonistic hero in the book had a prior relationship, a secret came out about her past and the hero went ape-sh*t. They were both devastated, both felt betrayed by the other and broke up. When the story starts again, they are pulled together by this murder case and, man, is this emotion palpable. Every scene they’re in together made my stomach ache. And it was so damn realistic. Every one of us has been in a situation where there was no going back, no putting the broken pieces back together, no matter how much you loved the other person. This was a case of the characters’ insecurities wrought from their past being just too ingrained in to their individual personalities to allow love to conquer.
I only reached the 1/3 mark of the story and finally had to give it up. The couple continued to travel down this hopeless path, hurting each other with every step. It killed me. If I weren’t a romance writer, maybe I could have persevered. And I’m not a conflict-squeamish type. I throw everything possible at my h/h. Drive them into crisis at every possible opportunity, but this was just too much. Had this been a romance, I would have stuck it out, because I would know they would turn it around and come out together in the end–as better people and with a stronger relationship. But it wasn’t. It was a thriller. And I just couldn’t watch these two injure each other any longer.
If you want to experience deep, visceral, moving relationship emotion — this is the book for you. If you love a complex thriller — this is the book for you. Maybe at some point, I’ll pick it up again, because IMO it’s an amazing study in writing emotion among other techniques. But not now. Not for a while. The battle still sticks with me, a month after I stopped listening not even half way through the book! Truly powerful!
If anyone has read this book, I don’t want spoilers, but if you could just tell me these two end up okay, I’ll start listening to it again.
Have you ever experienced a work that was just so good it was too good? Something so intense you had to put it down?



Hi Joan,
I’ve never had a romance I put down because it was too good, but I did put down House of Sand and Fog because I could feel the horrible end building when I was about a third through (Should have known, it was an Oprah pick). It was about that time I decided if it didn’t have a HEA I wasn’t going to read it and became very picky about what I read. I want an HEA. Good think there’s romance!
Yep, romance definitely has that benefit! I can take a so-so ending…I just can’t take that terrible one building like you mentioned. Thanks for stopping by, sweetie!
No problem! And I’m very excited to get the bookmark that is on my way from last time! Best of luck to everyone else who comments today (one to a customer!)
I read Jamie McGuire’s Beautiful Disaster in a day. I was sneaking chapters in at every available moment through out the day. It was one of those books that you want to throw up against a wall. I never wanted it to end. It had everything you want to read in a romance novel. I highly recommend it!
Hi Jessica,
So, I’m confused…did you like it or hate it? Or maybe a little of both?
I loved it, but I hated some of the choices the Hero made. I had a love/hate relationship with him, but he redeemed himself in the end. Sorry for the confusion.:)
Wow! Okay, now I’m just curious about Damaged. I’ll have to go look it up. I don’t know that I’ve ever put down a book because it was so good, but I have had to stop reading for a few minutes just to catch my breath. Not because of the pace or anything, just because it was so good it floored me.
I recently read Sandra Brown’s Envy and wow. I had to take a few long pauses during that one and just revel in the brilliance of it all. LOL! What a fantastic read. Also, Julia Quinn’s The Duke and I. Love, love, love!
Great post, Joan! ~D~
Sandra Brown’s ENVY is one of those I could read over and over again. She is brilliant. I just read CHILL FACTOR — fantastic! Wrote up two posts on how she creates conflict in that book. Brilliant. They’re on Savvy Authors under craft if you’re interested.
Great post. Have not read Damaged don’t think I will now. I have enough emotional upset in my own life.
I have put a book down (like Pet Cemetery and Cujo) because it was so intense I was pressed against the back of the sofa and breathing hard.
I stopped reading a book because in the first chapter the heroine, a police detective had cheated on her husband with another detective. Watched her lover be murdered by her husband and didn’t report it. In the next chapter she allowed an innocent man to be arrested for the crime. Done, finished. I can take a flawed heroine but this was pushing it. Put it down for months until I was bored and had to have something to read. The ending sucked also.
Hi Rita,
Yep, I’m with you on PET CEMETARY. Just too creepy. Now that other book would make me want to BURN it! I often wonder how something like that gets published? Who thought that was a good idea? Who thought that would draw in a reader?
Thanks for coming by.
*Who thought that would draw in a reader?*
A male author.
That’s a little scary Rita. Sometimes I’m not sure I really want to know what those guys (men!) are thinking.